a picture im working on and need help with

[Plauctan]

a picture im working on and need help with

Hey guys, I just thought I'd post a picture here that I'm working on for my crush for valentines day.
Any suggestions?

 

[Ice Knight]

I spose you made this on the puter? Well I can make 1 suggestion, but I dont know if it is useful, cuz it may be what your trying to get at. You could pull the fore-head in a bit.

 

[Plauctan]

yeh, thanks.

its not completely done, but it needs to be done by friday. Valentines. :S

 

[SkyFinch]

Try it with the eye closed.

 

[LUFFY-KUN]

WOW thats a big forehead....

 

[Nastyman!]

Yeah the eye closed would be better, it would give a more heart felt effect.